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Artist's Comments

this is my first (EVAR) attempt at making a comic. I'll admit I am not very confident in my humor. If fact, I made my roommate write the dialogue.

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:iconbubbleboy352:
lol nice

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the masochist says, "hurt me! hurt me!" the sadist replies, "no."
:iconempty-brooke:
lawls~! Checkov rox and this comic is epically awesome!
fave~!

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Krayos: Yo, Brooke. Update your comic regulary!
Brooke: ALL of them? No.
Krayos: Why not?
Brooke: The word Procrastinator mean anything to you?
Krayos: ... no.
Brooke: ... I'm drawing a pictrue of you for the fangirls.
Krayos: GAH! NoES!!
:iconsilverphantom:
That is overly adorable and it made me giggle! I highly approve! <3

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*BlurrFans, *WheeljackFans, and Other Club Awesomeness!
Artist Group: ~THWAQ
:iconlieutenantbunny:
XD HORRAY! I MAKA U LOL!

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Edo: Suffering from delusions of grandeur are we?
Me: No, I'm having a very good time.
:icontaintedtamer:
Hahahah XDDDD

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"You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake. You are the same decaying organic matter as everyone else, and we are all part of the same compost pile."
--Chuck Palahniuk, Fight Club, Chapter 17 -
:iconashulaces:
What the hell, that was awesome. XD

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'Donair Salad' missed the point
:iconeronlovesyaoi:
Ho man, Scotty is crackin' my shit up.

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"Soldiers who are not afraid of guns, bombs, capture, torture or death say that they are afraid of homosexuals. Clearly we should not be used as soldiers; we should be used as weapons." -Letter to the editor from The Advocate
:iconsanderpoo:
Super cute, good work.

I think you're right to be a little uncomfortable with the dialog. The first two panels are pretty clunky. I don't think you need that text in the first panel at all, since Spock and Kirk then repeat pretty much everything you need to know.
:iconlieutenantbunny:
i repeated myself on purpose. I thought it was funny....>___>

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Edo: Suffering from delusions of grandeur are we?
Me: No, I'm having a very good time.
:iconlieutenantbunny:
lol, thank you!

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Edo: Suffering from delusions of grandeur are we?
Me: No, I'm having a very good time.

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